Post by talitan on Dec 14, 2006 19:09:32 GMT -5
Note: Ok, i am way too lazy to go over this again.... so there will be typos and i originaly made this for a different site so a few of the things will be that site theamed... Like the city of sin.. well enough talking...
There was a small traveler village a few miles from the warrior kingdom of sin.... Its was a winter night small snow flakes were falling over the tavern of the town. A small group of travelers entered the tavern they were hunting a man that had disgraced there guild. They had information that there target was in the tavern. The group entered the tavern and quickly saw there bounty a man in his thirties wearing a black cloak and a claymore strapped to his back............................................
Talitan was drinking one of his favorites a greenmans ale he didn’t even know about the group of men that entered the tavern. He took a long drought of the ale and asked the barmaid for another he had drunk one to many ales... he knew that he was being hunted but he was tires and wanted a drink he payed the barmaid as she set down another ale................................ Hadarm was the leader of the group set out to bring the mans head back. Him and his five man group had gone over the plan over and over again. They were finally ready he nodded and his men set off to there positions one man an elf blocked the door. A man attempted to leave but the elf stopped him “let me through!” the man said angrily the elf brought a dagger to the mans stomach “Go back to your seat and don’t say a world or I will gut you..” he whispered into the mans ear the man just backed off to the bar. And sat down his eyes wide with fear. Hadarm and his four man escort began to stalk the cloaked figure hadarm drew the long curved dagger he nodded to one of his men. The man sprang forward and caught talitan in a head lock....... “ARGH WHAT THE” talitan was able to yell as he was caught in the head lock. He was pulled off the barr stool as a few let out gasps one of the group drew a katana “QUITE!” he yelled the watchers stared in silence... the man turned talitan around and he looked up into the face of Hadarm. “well well well we finally found you scum..” Hadarm said smugly to himself Talitan spat in Hadarms face. Now enraged Hadarm wiped the spit of his face and kicked talitan in the stomach. Talitan coughed painfully as he grabbed his stomach he looked up at Hadarm “you scum, hit a man while he is down...” he said threw clenched teeth Hadarm had to restrain from kicking talitan again “who are you calling scum?” Hadarm said drawing his foot back to kick Talitan again bit he thought better. “You must answer for your crimes against our guild! The penalty for mortally injuring the guild leader, is death... “ some of the tavern patrons gasped in surprise. Talitan rolled his eyes and sighed he knew Hadarm he would never go through it.
“If we are to execute you properly we must take down the hood” Hadarm said knowing that talitan NEVER put his hood down. “You don’t want to do that!” talitan said as a sense of dread drowned him. “It is not my choice scum” Hadarm said as he put his hand out to put the hood down. Talitan started struggling he began to sweat. “DON’T DO IT HADARM IT WILL MEAN DEATH FOR YOU AND EVERY ONE ELSE HERE!” talitan yelled when he said the thing about every one being killed. The man who had him the headlock loosened his grip Talitan took the chance and broke out of the headlock. He began sprinting Hadarm grabbed for talitan as he sprinted by he was able to catch the back of the hood and pull it down as talitan sprinted by. Talitan stopped dead in his tracks he had steel blue eyes and his face was pale from not getting ANY sunlight. He had untidy and dirty brown hair, a lump grew in his throat his eyes widened in fear.. He had only been standing there for a few seconds till he collapsed. He began rubbing at his eyes with clenched fists it felt like some one was gouging his eyes out with a sthingy. they stopped hurting he opened his eyes instead of the blue eyes were the yellow reptilian eyes of a demon. Hadarm stared into his once friends eyes he took a step forward and stopped the yellow eyes seemed to peirce his soul.. Talitan tore his gaze away from Hadarm almost as if it were triggered Talitan felt as if he was stabbed threw his chest. He feel to his knees again and clutched his chest he let out a scream of pain as it spread threw his body. His teeth began to grow into fangs his skin began to turn red his fingernails began to turn into dagger like claws. The smell of fire and smoke filled the tavern a small baby began crying and Talitan began to grow in size and stature his skin became blood red and parts of the cloak began to tear away.. Ram like horns began to grow out of his head Talitan couldn’t speak HE was taking over the thing that was now in Talitans place extended to its full height he was eight feet tall. The thing was a fearful site(think of the balrog but no wings and only 8 feet tall) parts of it where on fire it was a full fledged fire demon. Hadarm was glued in place fear struck his heart the creature looked around the tavern And let out a loud Roar that could be heard two miles away. Hadarm was nearly turned death but he was still glued in the same place. The creature turned its gaze at him “You are the first to die fool nothing can save you now..” The creature said slowly advancing in on Hadarm, Hadarm knew that the voice wasn’t the one he knew. in a state of panic Hadarm grabbed one of his mens katana. He wielded the katana the demon just stepped up to him grabbed the katana and chuckled darkly. The thing snapped the sword like a tooth pick. Hadarm just stared in disbelief as the demon droped the shattered blade at its feet. It walked forward hadarm barley had time to look up at the thing by the time he was sent flying by a heavy swat from the demon. Hadarm flew backwards and hit the tavern wall Half of his bones were broken but he was still conchs so he could just sit and watch as the demon walked up to him. Brought the foot up over his head and the split second of when he saw the foot come down on his skull. There was a sickening crack as the demon walked away from the dead body then the massacre began the demon lunged and crushed one of the men. The one guarding the door freaked and tried to open the door. “You can not escape me!” it yelled as it put its hand forward. A stream of fire shoot out of the demons hand and incinerated the man. The demon smiled as a fire started and broke out into the tavern. He destroyed the bar with a quick sweep of his mighty arm. And killed any one who got in his way he let out a dark chuckle as he sent a man flying into the encroaching flames.-----------------------------
Captain Torani of the small guard of the village was powerless he watched as the tavern burned he could hear the screams of innocent people he had sent his men to get water to douse the flames. He had to save some one just one person to show he wasn’t completely useless when his men returned they began to douse the flames he worked as quickly as he could but the fire was uncontrollable.-----
The demon had just polished the barmaid off with a quick flail of his knife like claws every one in the tavern was dead the fire had burned down half of the bar.....the demon then began to shrink the figure of talitan returned limp and not moving.----------------------
“HURRY WE CAN STOP THE FIRE NOW!” Torani yelled out the flames had slackened off a group of water carrying guards ran forward and drenched the area. Torani ran into the middle of the charred building many of the bodies looked like they were killed in a different manner then being burned to death. Especially the body of Hadarm I looked like he had been crushed.------------
Talitans mind was chaotic it was filled with the images of the people he had killed then they were swiped away the image of the demons face surrounded him. “WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!” talitan yelled he sounded like a six year old complaining to his parent.. All the demon did was chuckle “Just let me free and none of these things would be your fault....” the demon said in a soothing voice that chilled talitans spine. “NEVER GO BACK TO THE PITS THAT SPAWNED YOU!” Talitan yelled out “you cant stop me human” it said with the same voice “Burn in the deepest pit of hell!” talitan said darkly “IF I go you will join me.......” the demon said darkly then it disappeared to the darkest recess of talitans mind.------------
Talitan had been struggling the whole time he was fighting with the demon Torani found talitan “We have a survivor!” Torani held talitans hand and felt the pulse “stay with me don’t die on me!” torani said griping talitans hand. “HURRY HE’S FADING!” Torani yelled a group of guards carrying a stretcher came forward and hefted talitan onto the stretcher the men carried him away to the town hall.. Torani wiped sweet from his brow they were keeping the survivor in another room and they had sent away for a group of horses to take him to sin. “Sir the carriage is here!” one of the guards yelled out the ‘carriage’ was just a wooden wagon strapped too two horses. “Ok lets get him onto that carriage!” As Torani entered the room they were keeping talitan in the were surprised when the man wasn’t resting on the stretcher. “Hurry find him!” Torani yelled out.-------
Talitan stood on a hill over looking the village his cloak was full of tears and burns but it blew in the wind. He put the hood up and melted into the woods surrounding the village.......................................
*melow dramatic Violen music starts playing*
There was a small traveler village a few miles from the warrior kingdom of sin.... Its was a winter night small snow flakes were falling over the tavern of the town. A small group of travelers entered the tavern they were hunting a man that had disgraced there guild. They had information that there target was in the tavern. The group entered the tavern and quickly saw there bounty a man in his thirties wearing a black cloak and a claymore strapped to his back............................................
Talitan was drinking one of his favorites a greenmans ale he didn’t even know about the group of men that entered the tavern. He took a long drought of the ale and asked the barmaid for another he had drunk one to many ales... he knew that he was being hunted but he was tires and wanted a drink he payed the barmaid as she set down another ale................................ Hadarm was the leader of the group set out to bring the mans head back. Him and his five man group had gone over the plan over and over again. They were finally ready he nodded and his men set off to there positions one man an elf blocked the door. A man attempted to leave but the elf stopped him “let me through!” the man said angrily the elf brought a dagger to the mans stomach “Go back to your seat and don’t say a world or I will gut you..” he whispered into the mans ear the man just backed off to the bar. And sat down his eyes wide with fear. Hadarm and his four man escort began to stalk the cloaked figure hadarm drew the long curved dagger he nodded to one of his men. The man sprang forward and caught talitan in a head lock....... “ARGH WHAT THE” talitan was able to yell as he was caught in the head lock. He was pulled off the barr stool as a few let out gasps one of the group drew a katana “QUITE!” he yelled the watchers stared in silence... the man turned talitan around and he looked up into the face of Hadarm. “well well well we finally found you scum..” Hadarm said smugly to himself Talitan spat in Hadarms face. Now enraged Hadarm wiped the spit of his face and kicked talitan in the stomach. Talitan coughed painfully as he grabbed his stomach he looked up at Hadarm “you scum, hit a man while he is down...” he said threw clenched teeth Hadarm had to restrain from kicking talitan again “who are you calling scum?” Hadarm said drawing his foot back to kick Talitan again bit he thought better. “You must answer for your crimes against our guild! The penalty for mortally injuring the guild leader, is death... “ some of the tavern patrons gasped in surprise. Talitan rolled his eyes and sighed he knew Hadarm he would never go through it.
“If we are to execute you properly we must take down the hood” Hadarm said knowing that talitan NEVER put his hood down. “You don’t want to do that!” talitan said as a sense of dread drowned him. “It is not my choice scum” Hadarm said as he put his hand out to put the hood down. Talitan started struggling he began to sweat. “DON’T DO IT HADARM IT WILL MEAN DEATH FOR YOU AND EVERY ONE ELSE HERE!” talitan yelled when he said the thing about every one being killed. The man who had him the headlock loosened his grip Talitan took the chance and broke out of the headlock. He began sprinting Hadarm grabbed for talitan as he sprinted by he was able to catch the back of the hood and pull it down as talitan sprinted by. Talitan stopped dead in his tracks he had steel blue eyes and his face was pale from not getting ANY sunlight. He had untidy and dirty brown hair, a lump grew in his throat his eyes widened in fear.. He had only been standing there for a few seconds till he collapsed. He began rubbing at his eyes with clenched fists it felt like some one was gouging his eyes out with a sthingy. they stopped hurting he opened his eyes instead of the blue eyes were the yellow reptilian eyes of a demon. Hadarm stared into his once friends eyes he took a step forward and stopped the yellow eyes seemed to peirce his soul.. Talitan tore his gaze away from Hadarm almost as if it were triggered Talitan felt as if he was stabbed threw his chest. He feel to his knees again and clutched his chest he let out a scream of pain as it spread threw his body. His teeth began to grow into fangs his skin began to turn red his fingernails began to turn into dagger like claws. The smell of fire and smoke filled the tavern a small baby began crying and Talitan began to grow in size and stature his skin became blood red and parts of the cloak began to tear away.. Ram like horns began to grow out of his head Talitan couldn’t speak HE was taking over the thing that was now in Talitans place extended to its full height he was eight feet tall. The thing was a fearful site(think of the balrog but no wings and only 8 feet tall) parts of it where on fire it was a full fledged fire demon. Hadarm was glued in place fear struck his heart the creature looked around the tavern And let out a loud Roar that could be heard two miles away. Hadarm was nearly turned death but he was still glued in the same place. The creature turned its gaze at him “You are the first to die fool nothing can save you now..” The creature said slowly advancing in on Hadarm, Hadarm knew that the voice wasn’t the one he knew. in a state of panic Hadarm grabbed one of his mens katana. He wielded the katana the demon just stepped up to him grabbed the katana and chuckled darkly. The thing snapped the sword like a tooth pick. Hadarm just stared in disbelief as the demon droped the shattered blade at its feet. It walked forward hadarm barley had time to look up at the thing by the time he was sent flying by a heavy swat from the demon. Hadarm flew backwards and hit the tavern wall Half of his bones were broken but he was still conchs so he could just sit and watch as the demon walked up to him. Brought the foot up over his head and the split second of when he saw the foot come down on his skull. There was a sickening crack as the demon walked away from the dead body then the massacre began the demon lunged and crushed one of the men. The one guarding the door freaked and tried to open the door. “You can not escape me!” it yelled as it put its hand forward. A stream of fire shoot out of the demons hand and incinerated the man. The demon smiled as a fire started and broke out into the tavern. He destroyed the bar with a quick sweep of his mighty arm. And killed any one who got in his way he let out a dark chuckle as he sent a man flying into the encroaching flames.-----------------------------
Captain Torani of the small guard of the village was powerless he watched as the tavern burned he could hear the screams of innocent people he had sent his men to get water to douse the flames. He had to save some one just one person to show he wasn’t completely useless when his men returned they began to douse the flames he worked as quickly as he could but the fire was uncontrollable.-----
The demon had just polished the barmaid off with a quick flail of his knife like claws every one in the tavern was dead the fire had burned down half of the bar.....the demon then began to shrink the figure of talitan returned limp and not moving.----------------------
“HURRY WE CAN STOP THE FIRE NOW!” Torani yelled out the flames had slackened off a group of water carrying guards ran forward and drenched the area. Torani ran into the middle of the charred building many of the bodies looked like they were killed in a different manner then being burned to death. Especially the body of Hadarm I looked like he had been crushed.------------
Talitans mind was chaotic it was filled with the images of the people he had killed then they were swiped away the image of the demons face surrounded him. “WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!” talitan yelled he sounded like a six year old complaining to his parent.. All the demon did was chuckle “Just let me free and none of these things would be your fault....” the demon said in a soothing voice that chilled talitans spine. “NEVER GO BACK TO THE PITS THAT SPAWNED YOU!” Talitan yelled out “you cant stop me human” it said with the same voice “Burn in the deepest pit of hell!” talitan said darkly “IF I go you will join me.......” the demon said darkly then it disappeared to the darkest recess of talitans mind.------------
Talitan had been struggling the whole time he was fighting with the demon Torani found talitan “We have a survivor!” Torani held talitans hand and felt the pulse “stay with me don’t die on me!” torani said griping talitans hand. “HURRY HE’S FADING!” Torani yelled a group of guards carrying a stretcher came forward and hefted talitan onto the stretcher the men carried him away to the town hall.. Torani wiped sweet from his brow they were keeping the survivor in another room and they had sent away for a group of horses to take him to sin. “Sir the carriage is here!” one of the guards yelled out the ‘carriage’ was just a wooden wagon strapped too two horses. “Ok lets get him onto that carriage!” As Torani entered the room they were keeping talitan in the were surprised when the man wasn’t resting on the stretcher. “Hurry find him!” Torani yelled out.-------
Talitan stood on a hill over looking the village his cloak was full of tears and burns but it blew in the wind. He put the hood up and melted into the woods surrounding the village.......................................
*melow dramatic Violen music starts playing*